The Discursive Poem

Discussion in 'Writers Forum' started by Didymus Doppelgänger, Jul 5, 2009.

  1. Didymus Doppelgänger

    Didymus Doppelgänger Misfit Lover

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    If electricity filled your words before mine
    Would you go for the knife or just stare?

    WORDS WORDS WORDS
    You use them to inveigle me
    But those same words show me mercy

    Roll your dice and hope the number you get wont kill...
    Black against white?
    No, not a fight
    Black AND white
    that seems right...

    Your promises are like lightning
    Unfortunately, you forgot the thunder
    I was in pieces before i got put into the blender
    ....now im one

    Now im at the end
    Or have i just begun?
    Maybe its a circle...
    If so, I'll run, run, run
     
  2. Question

    Question Member

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    hey I really like this lots of clever ideas. "you forgot the thunder" ...very cool. Have you been writing long? Keep it up! I just started writing as my girl recently left me. Its an amazing way to get things out, almost too good.
     
  3. Didymus Doppelgänger

    Didymus Doppelgänger Misfit Lover

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    Thnx! I've been writing off an on for about 3 years.
    Sorry to hear about your girl. It is a great way to get things out.
     
  4. gesone

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    I loved the sound shifts!
     

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