If electricity filled your words before mine Would you go for the knife or just stare? WORDS WORDS WORDS You use them to inveigle me But those same words show me mercy Roll your dice and hope the number you get wont kill... Black against white? No, not a fight Black AND white that seems right... Your promises are like lightning Unfortunately, you forgot the thunder I was in pieces before i got put into the blender ....now im one Now im at the end Or have i just begun? Maybe its a circle... If so, I'll run, run, run
hey I really like this lots of clever ideas. "you forgot the thunder" ...very cool. Have you been writing long? Keep it up! I just started writing as my girl recently left me. Its an amazing way to get things out, almost too good.
Thnx! I've been writing off an on for about 3 years. Sorry to hear about your girl. It is a great way to get things out.