hey man...i feel your pain. i love the part you said it was dragging you to nature...thats what we all need...to feel alone in this world and realize human nature will kick in...keep writing no one is truly lost in this world....we just havnt been found by someone who wants to listen. read mine and tell me what you think. i believe the title is : newbee...just a few poems...views appreciated.
wow! that second one really captures my thoughts...a little easier to read if your trying to reach a crowd of non poets.
no one listenes no one gains we're just spys in the house of pain like smart mimes we hold the truth its in our knowledge and through our youth but tools and duches croud our muse they hold me down from what eye veiw but mind over matter right, remember, not everything in your mind matters so many images....broken and shattered jesus could have been a woman and i was baptized against a black sheep wall whats that you say? do you hear them call? we all have demons inside us all just learn to face them before you fall
your poem is beautiful!! it really speaks to me...i spend hours looking at the sky and im glad hear someone describe the feelings that come to mind
Love it, and I can relate to this. I spend most of my time at night - nearly everynight - Looking up to the moon, the giant rock swinging around us.
that's the style i like. its raw and natural. what comes out spontaneously in a fit of creativity is better than anything planned and premeditated. just flow. the above piece is kinda basic in rhyme scheme ( A with B , B with A) but it flowed well.
