Her Body is Art

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Burn, Nov 9, 2004.

  1. Burn

    Burn Member

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    As the hip curves,
    The chest follows patterns of breath,
    Her eyes, like the midnight stars,
    Her goddess hands touch the velvet sheets,
    In perfection, she grips them.

    What revelation lays before me, I
    cannot express through words,
    Oh, the paint through which I place,
    A reflection of the beauty faced.

    Naked as the cloudless evening,
    Beautiful, untouched and loving.
    Goddess of Earth, I yearn to touch you,
    Knowing I will only lose myself to perfection.

    A kiss from you,
    A heavens' gift,

    Beauty is your expression.
     
  2. nitemarehippygirl

    nitemarehippygirl Senior Member

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    "Oh, the paint through which I place,
    A reflection of the beauty faced."

    that was lovely.... :)
     
  3. innocentpoison333

    innocentpoison333 Member

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    Yor really do make her sound like a piece of art. Very good
     
  4. StickyPoohy

    StickyPoohy Member

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    Thanks for passing on your vision of beauty...

    S
     
  5. Hippievixen

    Hippievixen Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    Lovely poem. Naked as the cloudless evening... that's nice :)
     
  6. SoLoMaN

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    Lush imagery, i really like it. Do you have anything else posted? i would look but i get guilty feelings, partly because i feel like i'm a stalker going through peoples old posts, and because i have been known to steal peoples poetry and pretend its mine. OOps, that probably just knocked my credibility back to the primeval soup of somewhere.

    I'll get my coat.
     

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