A Meditation On Failed Relationships

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Saule, Jul 29, 2009.

  1. Saule

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    I wake up and kick a hole in the sun.
    It's liquid butter center melts
    down and spills all over
    my morning pancakes.
     
  2. Venatrix

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    I love that.
     
  3. Elogy

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    Good Stuff.
     
  4. Stabby

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    Nice thought and good execution. I'd imagine sun butter would be very high in vitamin d which would cheer someone up.
     
  5. gesone

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    Great image, man!
     

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