I Could Say

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by LorienLord, Jul 6, 2009.

  1. LorienLord

    LorienLord Member

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    I Could Say

    I could say
    I love your eyes so deep
    Pools of quicksand
    From which I cannot escape
    And slowly as I sink
    I realize I'm not afraid
    To drown in you.

    Or I could say
    I love your hair so soft
    A river of dark satin
    That flows like a torrent
    Down your pillow
    And across my chest
    Flooding the desert of my soul.

    Or I could say
    I love your lips so warm
    That speak the words I long to hear
    Falling on me like evening rain
    Washing away all my fears
    As every night you call me to your side
    Whispering promises of eternal love.

    Or I could say
    I love all the exquisiteness that is you
    As your soft and gentle curves
    Beckon my fingers to travel the paths
    Leading to the crossroads
    Of your heart.​
     
  2. Therese Aline

    Therese Aline Slave to the man

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    I like that, nice flow. Hard to write well-flowing free-form poetry.
     
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