How do you like my poem?

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Orsino2, Nov 8, 2004.

  1. Orsino2

    Orsino2 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    Poon-tang ripple dee doy
    I've got myself a sex toy
    Doo doo dee doo doo doo
    And when I'm feeling horny
    I'll just get drunk and screw
    I've got myself a CD
    It sounds really gay
    And when snoop dog starts rapping
    I sing all the doo dah day
    I have pants
    I like pants
    Tick tock tick tock
    Skiddley Dee
    I hump old ladies at the age of seventy-two
    I do it all night long 'cause it's easy to do
    Spank spank on my booty
    Rumpleskumpledee
    I've got a magic twanger
    And it talks to me
    Cocoa puffs are made of rangle dangle
    And I eat spangle pangle
    For frangle dangle dee
    My mouthpiece gets to talking
    And my groin starts squawking
    Doo doo da do dee dee
    The dog goes "woof"
    The cow goes "moo"
    And that doesn't mean
    I don't love you
    Shake shake shake it
    All night long
    Dance dance dance
    Ching Chang Jiang Wong
     
  2. LivinNreflection

    LivinNreflection Member

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    That was an intersting poem I must say. Made me laugh
     
  3. FerrisBueller

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    I like it

    i think it works

    i hump 72 year old ladies too
     
  4. kidder

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    It was quirky. Whether that's good or bad is one of subjectivity's more interesting exercises. I'm no fan of snoop dog but Neil Young is one of my gods. I'm not sure he'd enjoy being mentioned alongside you-know-who.
     
  5. lostndelirious

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    that was ... something!
     
  6. moonlightdelerium

    moonlightdelerium Senior Member

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    Put music to it George, please! It could go to the music of I Shall Be Free by Dylan.
    Also, your quote is so true that its scary. I'm so envious of his wife Peggi!
     
  7. Orsino2

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    ahahahahaaha :p :D
     
  8. Goddess Om

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    I wish I had a magic twanger that talks to me...oh well
     
  9. Orsino2

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    I unfortunately, do have one. :(
     

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