I had a dream that i was having sex with a spaghetti person. At the end it turned to be my mom. I'm still scarred from that dream to this day.
Ok, so heres the next part. I walked up the stairs to find a giant shopping complex. I couldn't get over just how real everything looked! I had to look real close at an object to see it was actually computer generated imagery (CGI). I still had this raging erection in my pants. There were girls everywhere. Everyone was talking and interacting so realistically. There was no way a program could do this. The things they were saying and the way they were behaving could never be programmed. I just couldn't believe what I was seeing. So I'm looking at all the girls passing by, looking for one to quickly fuck. I first looked in a hairdressers and there was a beautiful Hispanic girl in there. I decided to look around more just in case I found a better girl. If I blow my load in this Hispanic chick and found a better one later on? I would be VERY dissapointed. So I look around the WHOLE busy complex, frantically looking for a girl to quickly fuck. I could do whatever I pleased to whoever I chosed as they were just VR. I went down escalators, checked out girls passing by, girls sitting sown eating.. I couldn't make up my mind and was going to come regardless! I ended up back at the hair dressers and looked at the Hispanic girl with my erection sticking out of my pants. I actually spunked and it went all over her hair and face. It wasnt the full load. The mother load was still there but I was running out of time. She looked at me and said " OMG, thats disgusting! Why did you do just that to me?". Awhile see was freaking out, I left the hairdressers and tried to find another level in the game with new people. I found a back door that looked like a fire exit. I went through that and the door closed behind me. There was a long corridor with two guys in the middle of it. I walked past them and they were talking about their shift. I could even smell their sweat and deodorant. I stopped at looked at them both. I couldn't get over how fucking real they were. I could tell one of them was Polish just my looking his face before he said anything. So at the end of the corridor there was this giant, dark area with guys in fork lift trunks and uniforms moving things around. It was really boring so I went back down the corridor to go back to the shopping complex. I passed the two guys and they started the same conversation as they did when I originally passed them. I got the the fire exit but there was no door handle. I walked back to the giant, dark area and as I passed the two guys, the started the same conversation again... I got pissed off with it and when to take off the VR helmet. All I could feel was my face! I panicked and my heart started racing! I started clawing at my face to touch the VR helmet. It must have been on me. I looked closely at the wall and could see it was still made of CGI. I felt my face and it was really damaged by my clawing. I got angry with the programme and reached deep into my mouth, grabbed whatever I could and pulled with all of my strength. I dislocated my tongue and all the meat was hanging out of my mouth! I couldn't close my mouth after that. There was only one way out of this.. I had to go to the top of a high rise building and throw myself off it. That way I would be dead and the program would finish. So I found another door and went through it. There were some stairs in this room. I kept going up stairs to find the highest point so I could throw myself off it. About 6 flights up I bumped into myself. I looked at me and I looked at me back! We both had our tongues hanging out of our mouths and our faces were serverly scratched up. We didn't say anything to each other. We just both nodded to each other and both carried on up the flights of stairs to find the highest point. So we got the the top. It was evening by then and raining heavily. There was thunder and lighting. All the windows were smashed. There was no lighting at the top floor and everything was dirty. We both started going through rooms to find a window to jump from. We finally found a room with an outside window. The rain was gushing through the broken glass panes. There was a dirty sink next to the window. With a smashed mirror above it. I looked into the mirror at my dislocated tongue. I couldn't feel any pain. I just couldn't believe just how really everything was. I looked closely at my double and he was looking closely at me. We were about an inch face to face. We were looking at our CGI eyes in amazement. It was time to jump. Thats when I heard stuttering out of the window. It was the girl from the field... I looked out of the window and I could see her sobbing and shaking with her skirt over her head. She was in the same positon as before but this time in a dirty alleyway. There were these guys aproaching her. They looked like gang bangers. They had sports cars parked around her and were armed with machetes. My heart started racing again. I had to save her. I really wanted to fix her before I left the programme. I aimed and threw myself out of the window toward the guy closest to her. I felt heavy butterflies and was defened by the air blowing past me. I was falling soo fast. I eventually hit the floor. I opened my eyes to find I wasn't hurt at all. The guy under me was completely mangled. The fall had snapped his spin and there was blood everywhere. I could see his brains all over the concrete being washed away by the rain. I could hear the girl sobbing next to me with her skirt pull over her. The other guys were coming at me with knifes. They had big grins on their faces. This is were I was supposed to leave the program. They were supposed to stab me to death and rape and cut up the girl from the field. I felt disgust. I tried to grit my teeth but I couldn't due to my tongue. The sound of her crying sent me into a fit of murderous rage. I blacked out and went for the other men. I grabbed them and split their fucking melon heads openon the concrete floor with my hands. When I was done I stood up and looked at my double looking at me covered in the rain. He said, "Great, now we're stuck in this fucking game". I woke up after he said that.
this is an amazing story i think u should turn it into like a steven king book you know add some details make it longer that shit would sell