who are you?...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Oleanderluver, Nov 2, 2004.

  1. Oleanderluver

    Oleanderluver Visitor

    Your name is unknown
    But I sit and ponder
    over a thousand names

    Your face still unseen
    But I strauggle
    to make out your features

    Your voice unheard
    But I yearn for a ringing
    in my ears

    Your touch has not been felt
    But I still get goosebumps

    Your kiss has not been tasted
    But I lick my lips waiting

    Your scent undetected
    But I wait to inhale

    Your intentions not clear
    But I fantasize in dreams

    Your time uncertain
    But I still count the days

    Your prescence unwitnessed
    But I search for you in crowds

    Your company anticipated
    But has yet to occur

    Your my soul mate
    and I'll be waiting for you......


     
  2. sunflowerAlys

    sunflowerAlys Member

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    Your time uncertain
    But I still count the days


    oh dear i have done that so many many times

     
  3. thaone0715

    thaone0715 Member

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    very nice, relatable
     
  4. unknowngirl

    unknowngirl Member

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    nice job I thought it was a good poem.
     

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