Have you felt like writing in the dark white sea? I did, Like a man who found a woman’s body I licked the salt from my fingertips The sand is like tiny little rocks Fallen together I can’t see it In the cold sky I want to feel the water with my naked feet A white haze is covered behind the night Behind me the lights are leaving I keep running to dark water There is no end to my view No beginning Until I touch the sea… I just wrote this. Please let me know what you think, it would mean alot to me.
'Behind me the lights are leaving'... wonderful line! 'I keep running to dark water'...another good one! I loved the romanticism implicit in your opening line but then you stuck that body thingy in there. Just be there, writing in the sea at night. Give us magic. Like that!
i think this is a really beautiful and poingiant poem. if only i could spell ps. i would jyst like to type, although whoever may happen to read this did not know i was very sad but... i feel so much better now. i feel able to help my self again and wooo how strong. thank you very much xxxxxx i love you.
Yes, its magical. Full of purity and opening. Expanses of the awe inspiring unknown; universes in sand granuals. I really enjoyed this.
