Haiku Game

Discussion in 'Hippies' started by PAX-MAN, Apr 4, 2009.

  1. PAX-MAN

    PAX-MAN Just A Old Hippy

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    Last nite I stumbled upon a very interesting game where someone started a haiku. The next post was also a haiku but it started with the last line of the previous haiku. I was amazed at how creative it was. There were over 436 pages of it. so I thought- why not start one here???

    A little green peeking through.
    A sea of snow all around
    Summer will be here soon.




    PAX
     
  2. PAX-MAN

    PAX-MAN Just A Old Hippy

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    Summer will be here soon.
    Memories are dancing in my head
    Brings warmth to my body

    PAX
     
  3. PAX-MAN

    PAX-MAN Just A Old Hippy

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    Brings warmth to my body.
    If only my soul could follow.
    Lay my head to rest.
     
  4. PAX-MAN

    PAX-MAN Just A Old Hippy

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    Lay my head to rest.
    Closing eyes mind running wild
    where's the love
     
  5. PAX-MAN

    PAX-MAN Just A Old Hippy

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    I am really sorry that I could not spark your interest in trying something new but I guess Haiku is not as much fun as trying to decide what to wear tomorrow so that everyone will know that you are a hippy.

    GOOD-BYE

    PAX
     
  6. Dorian_Gray

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    where`s the love
    we keep asking each other
    finding no answers

    peace man... i like the idea :)
    i just thought, haiku`s were consisting of 5 - 7 - 5 syllables?!?
     
  7. DazedGypsy

    DazedGypsy fire

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    a lonely spirit
    wandering into the trees
    this is what I am
     
  8. Spookytheferret

    Spookytheferret Member

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    nature comes and goes
    simplicity at its best
    the wind whirls, silence.
     
  9. PAX-MAN

    PAX-MAN Just A Old Hippy

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    finding no answers
    looking deep into your heart
    where the love grows now

    Yes Dorian Grey
    Japanese Haiku are 5 / 7 / 5
    Hippy Haiku aren't as strict........

    DazedGypsy and Spookytheferret:
    Your Haikus are very nice but you didn't follow the one and only rule of the game- you are supposed to start your Haiku using the last line of the previous Haiku.

    PAX
     
  10. DazedGypsy

    DazedGypsy fire

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    if it isn't strict,
    well then why do we have rules?
    you can't control me.

    lol :)
     
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    Jimi_Lives Member

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    patter, rain, patter
    the creek rises above bank
    absorbed by the grass
     
  12. LittleRaisin

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    absorbed by the grass
    time slipping slower and slower
    is this just a dream?
     
  13. DazedGypsy

    DazedGypsy fire

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    is this just a dream?
    colors are talking to me
    I fall into blue
     
  14. free-spirit77

    free-spirit77 Member

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    I fall into blue
    no answers here
    just a feel of serenity
     
  15. TiedyeDreams

    TiedyeDreams Member

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    just a feel of serenity
    the earth opens all around
    she is alive now
     
  16. free-spirit77

    free-spirit77 Member

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    she is alive now
    green lush plains
    peace within and out
     
  17. Jimi_Lives

    Jimi_Lives Member

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    peace within and out
    I feel the shimmer of air
    The sky echoes still
     
  18. free-spirit77

    free-spirit77 Member

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    the sky echoes still
    in my dreams
    reflections of the past
     
  19. MatchboxAwakening

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    reflections of the past
    tommorow can never know
    what today may bring
     
  20. PAX-MAN

    PAX-MAN Just A Old Hippy

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    what today might bring
    elusive butterfly of love
    it comes floating by

    PAX
     

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