There once was a man....

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Oleanderluver, Nov 2, 2004.

  1. Oleanderluver

    Oleanderluver Visitor

    There once was a man
    With pale blue eyes
    like ocean waves
    flooding over me

    There once was man
    I embraced
    behind closed doors

    There once was man
    whom i dared not to love

    There once was a man
    whom loved me back

    There once was a man
    I should have given into

    There once was a man
    I should have made mine
    But now Im afraid
    I ran out of time

    There once was a man
    I should have reached sooner

    There once was a man
    I should have held on to

    There once was a man
    I longed for at night

    There once was a man
    who longed for me

    There once was a man
    whom no matter
    how hard we tried
    there was always
    someone in the way

    There once was a man
    I will never forget

    There once was a man
    I will always love

    There once was a man
    named Mikey............



    Morale of the poem: if there is someone you love never hesitate
    because they wn't always be there and you'll be left to wonder what if..

     
  2. unknowngirl

    unknowngirl Member

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    Your right. I can't think of better words to put it in a poem. Very good poem.:)
     
  3. kidder

    kidder Member

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    There once was a poem that should have been shorter...
     
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