WOODS SQUAT'N by HippieHair

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by HippieHair, Oct 11, 2008.

  1. HippieHair

    HippieHair Member

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    for the yooper women who dare

    to bare their darriere'

    in less than ideal conditions

    for the u.p. girls unafraid

    to make lemonade

    while in the squat position -

    eyes darting here and there

    hoping not to see a bear

    attracted to your underwear -

    hurry up !

    pull em up !

    before a bear makes you his sup !

    tripping over branches

    rushing back to your jeep -

    landing in the drivers seat

    with one gigantic leap !

    hurry up !

    start it up !

    fumble with the key

    just then , it dawns on you

    you forgot to pee !

    :cheers2:

     
  2. Strawperson

    Strawperson Member

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    Ha! That was funny. The irregular rhyme structure keeps it from being too predictable.
     
  3. OneUndone

    OneUndone Member

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    Yeah, very nice! Got a good laugh out of it.
     
  4. *Heather*

    *Heather* Member

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    nicely written :)

    peace and love
     
  5. Gig

    Gig Member

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    Well done, but I hope you finally got to pee!
     
  6. mckarkies

    mckarkies Member

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    salute to michigan.
     
  7. HippieHair

    HippieHair Member

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    I want to thank everyone for the very nice reviews ! It makes me happy to know i've made others smile..
     
  8. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    u.p. wut, wut. munising represent.
     
  9. Ruthy

    Ruthy Member

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    ONLY you hippie lol
     
  10. Dancing til Dawn

    Dancing til Dawn Senior Member

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    :love:

    always say it as it is girl!
     
  11. LovesLiquid

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    :groupwave: very nice lol
     

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