run

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by leafstew, Mar 13, 2009.

  1. leafstew

    leafstew Member

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    drum beat,
    two feet,
    dancing to the struggle of being alive.
    chin to the horizon,
    elbows bent,
    able to lock
    and lend
    balance to the stumbling,
    pace quickening,
    and mind
    silent,
    breath close
    to the pulse of this life.
     
  2. Vetty214

    Vetty214 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    simple, and I could sense the "run". I liked how the mind is silent during that run...
     
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