Feeling

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by madeastoner, Mar 16, 2009.

  1. madeastoner

    madeastoner Member

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    Known as a friend, a kinsmans kin
    My youthful days had just begin
    Folly of a broken mind
    Now the reality is unkind
    Maybe once there was a hope
    Today there is no way to cope
    I sit and think of things may come
    Those that are been and done
    Nothing seems to ease the rain
    Except the dreams that you, contain
    You bring a wave of joy and hope
    These things, what left, I have to cope
    My wish would be a happy life
    Peaceful, gay, and free of strife
    Where you go, where I stay
    I doubt these thoughts will decay
    Forever in my mind you'll be
    However saddened it leave me be
    Fate is fate and we can't be free
    But this cannot, will not, comfort me
    Your life has made a mark on mine
    The memory, the feeling, etched sublime
    If one thing I can rest upon
    My love for thee, never gone
    But I am the one to blame
    Hang my head in painful shame
    Never happened, never will
    And this, is why, my heart is chill
     
  2. Some call me Jim

    Some call me Jim Member

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    i quite like this.
     

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