your excuses have become destitute,destructive played out..... deteriorating whats left of your washed out soul- yet, your still determined to play the part of the compassionate, unexpecting,victim of sin deciet and annihilation-HA! who do you think your fooling? your feeble mind.... delicate lie... disheaveled heart... scandalized love forever
Ya, everyone has their own version, this was well written, an expressive, ........ But, lets not forget the heartless wench's as well!, like my son's Mother, Court ordered joint coustody, they say you have to pay this much, I say, "That's not enough!, round it off to the nearest hundred and I'll add more if she needs it", a six hour mediation was expected by the court between her and I, it was more like six min's, no time for Jerry Springer here, it's the kid(s) that come first here, I've found I was thee only one thinking this, as she's on her second marriage and was never married to me, so!, and she moved three times so I, or her ex Hub. wouldn't know where she was, and more important my son is!,it's now going on three years since I've seen and or spoke with my son, if I go thru the courts, my Lawyer say's I have nothing to say cause it's court ordered joint coustody and she'll be arressted for taking him, so I have to find her myself, or she'll go to prison, and she has to younger ones, it's this reason, these three reasons I don't go court, who really pays? The Kid's. Sorry for ramblin. I ~ Peace!
this is great, anytime that I can hear the inflection in my head, I know it's some good spoken word. this is one of those pieces I'd just love to see at an open mike one night... thanks for sharing