dead beat dad

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Ziarae, Oct 30, 2004.

  1. Ziarae

    Ziarae Member

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    your excuses have become
    destitute,destructive
    played out.....
    deteriorating whats left
    of your washed out soul-
    yet, your still
    determined to play
    the part of the compassionate, unexpecting,victim of sin
    deciet and annihilation-HA!
    who do you think your fooling?
    your feeble mind....
    delicate lie...
    disheaveled heart...
    scandalized love forever
     
  2. Icurus

    Icurus Member

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    Ya, everyone has their own version, this was well written,
    an expressive, ........

    But, lets not forget the heartless wench's as well!, like my son's
    Mother, Court ordered joint coustody, they say you have to pay
    this much, I say, "That's not enough!, round it off to the nearest
    hundred and I'll add more if she needs it", a six hour mediation was
    expected by the court between her and I, it was more like six min's,
    no time for Jerry Springer here, it's the kid(s) that come first here,
    I've found I was thee only one thinking this, as she's on her second
    marriage and was never married to me, so!, and she moved three times
    so I, or her ex Hub. wouldn't know where she was, and more important my son is!,it's now going on three years since I've seen and or spoke with my son,
    if I go thru the courts, my Lawyer say's I have nothing to say cause it's
    court ordered joint coustody and she'll be arressted for taking him, so I have to find her myself, or she'll go to prison, and she has to younger ones,
    it's this reason, these three reasons I don't go court, who really pays?
    The Kid's.
    Sorry for ramblin.
    I ~ Peace!
     
  3. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    this is great, anytime that I can hear the inflection in my head, I know it's some good spoken word. this is one of those pieces I'd just love to see at an open mike one night... thanks for sharing :)
     
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