"Hey how ya doin man Are you still with me Hello? I know whats going on I've been there too" Entranced w/ heightened sense Speeding endless thought A seated voyage of wisdom All-knowing notions An incredible rhythm of sight "You're right on schedule I'm glad you arrived I was begining to worry Hey, focus, I'm right here I know you're feeling distracted It's ok" Visual conquest A peak of instant knowledge A sacred mountain of dark pleasure Now a solemn garden Time to enjoy your new gifts Celebrate your new self You've broken through
i really like this because i experienced something very similar just the other night. i felt enlightenment within my reach one night and to my suprise one of my very good friends that i hadn't seen in a long time showed up. it was like she was waiting at the end to be there when i took my last step. for some reason i felt like she was in town to celebrate this new self. maybe its just all in my mind i dunno.
I enjoy the ambiguity, you could be speaking to a number of people throughout this poem. I ecspecially like the part about being distracted, and it being ok..i like
