A lateral glance in your direction... A hand to your heart... A whisper to the wind... orbits through this night through this dire maze of pathchwork tragically stitched within my heart the intriguing triangle of love assembeling itself carefully of bone and rock the bones loosly looping through the knots fragile hearts crumble fall defenselessly try to digest the illuminating existence of harmony tranquility just as the sun sets the orbit of night-bites the method of the lost your absence the nature of your mind falls from the fire to burn the hopeful smile the whisper-a lie-myth-dream to slowly slice the heart that once loved you so....
ouch, thats well written. the nuances of your imagery is intriguing... 'orbits through this night through this dire maze of pathchwork tragically stitched within my heart the intriguing triangle of love assembeling itself carefully of bone and rock'
gorgeous, beautiful, and sad; this is terrifically well written! your technique here is impeccable, and effective; thanks for sharing this