fragile hearts

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Ziarae, Oct 28, 2004.

  1. Ziarae

    Ziarae Member

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    A lateral glance in your direction...
    A hand to your heart...
    A whisper to the wind...

    orbits through this night
    through this dire maze of pathchwork
    tragically stitched within my heart
    the intriguing triangle of love
    assembeling itself carefully
    of bone and rock
    the bones loosly looping
    through the knots
    fragile hearts
    crumble
    fall
    defenselessly try to digest the
    illuminating existence of
    harmony
    tranquility
    just as the sun sets
    the orbit of night-bites
    the method of the lost
    your absence
    the nature of your mind
    falls from the fire
    to burn the hopeful smile
    the whisper-a lie-myth-dream
    to slowly slice the heart that once loved you so....
     
  2. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    ouch, thats well written.

    the nuances of your imagery is intriguing...

    'orbits through this night
    through this dire maze of pathchwork
    tragically stitched within my heart
    the intriguing triangle of love
    assembeling itself carefully
    of bone and rock'
     
  3. thaone0715

    thaone0715 Member

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    that's unerstandable
     
  4. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    gorgeous, beautiful, and sad; this is terrifically well written! your technique here is impeccable, and effective; thanks for sharing this :)
     
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