If my path began after you began your journey, then i'm sorry for being jealous jealous of seeing you finish this course before i will after all isn't that only fair? maybe i'm the reason you got there ahead of time if so now i understand why i need your help i would never be able to do this on my own i don't want your help but i need it why can't i just admit that on our own we are helpless? i have the power i just need to plug in i'm shutting the door on the world but don't worry i'll leave it unlocked i'm putting the pieces back together it'll be hard to accept but you must if only for your own salvation you need not even pay attention i'll love you either way
Hmm there is beauty in this simplicity, the opening stanza is a great eye catching intro, and the rest tightly follows your theme. Last stanza made me choke up...just a personal allergic reaction.
