what should I do?

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by PerfectChaos8095, Jan 27, 2009.

  1. PerfectChaos8095

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    I wrote a short poem but I can't decide what to do with it.

    I feel the pain caused over the years
    I reach out for hope, there is only despair
    No matter how hard I try, I still see the tears
    A wave of sadness still hangs in the air



    Should I add on to it or not?
     
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