Shark swim deep, shark swim slow. Body so fine, teeth like snow. Black is his eyes and body so dark, King of the sea is the Eye of the Shark. Small may he be, but great in might. Long may he live, in battle or fight. No noise may he make, but sure to mark, The victim of him in the Eye of the Shark. Body so slender an jaws so strong. Keep out of his way and you can't go wrong. Or h will find you in the Sea of Death. The Eye of the Shark will catch your breath!
ooohhh I liked this one, it was different than others and thats good. I liked your choice of words and the flow of the poem. Thanks for sharing!
Well executed! Flow and focus and form. Love that initial stanza. I can see a bunch of kids chanting this one and loving it!
