something i just posted for all again fellings,,,,

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by saffronfrancisburnet, Oct 23, 2004.

  1. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    to all,


    many ways to enter the heart,
    sold the soul,tempted words
    upon my head..
    yet balance tilts for none.
    no love will bound this follower
    nor end this path we step.
    yet careful progress will
    correct our many footsteps...

    time will allow only a second,
    to reflect forgive, forget
    within my head...
    to play old memories again.
    no line to draw ,for him to cross,
    not bleeding, hung high
    for death.
    so timid the light of movement
    fond love will hold me now....

    warm sun breathe aloud and free,
    unpon my heart rest,hear my beat.
    no band to escort us home,
    yet moon beams ,follow our suns
    love and peace.....
    be whole be loved be as one....



    thank you not sure if this is written well
    just posted my feelings again
    how i veiw our change our human kind
    our life world and love for all .....
     
  2. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    thank you for that
    beautiful reply

    one drop to fill the seas of tears........

    love npeace from saff.
     
  3. LivinNreflection

    LivinNreflection Member

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    That is my favorite line! I liked it a lot. I loved the flow of your poem, it flowed well. Good job and thanks for sharing!
     

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