just something i wrote a while back

So heres the deal, For a long time now whenever i'm feeling overwelmed with life i will sometimes just start writting what i am thinking down on a peace of papper and then will hide the papper just where ever i can at the time. So every once in a while when i'm looking threw old stuff or cleaning a spot out i find these pappers that i have wrote my feelings down on time to time. The thing is though that i have never wrote a date on any of them and i've wrote so many that i cant always remmber the particuler time that i wrote that certain one or sometimes i cant even rember writing it b/c of how long it has been. So anyways, i was cleaning my vehicle out the other day and i found a few in my center console that i had stuck away. Well i just picked the one out that was the least depressing and overly personal. Its kinda short though but it goes something like this:

The happiness you see in a sun set is the happiness you can see in me. If you just let me be. You treat me like a star in the sky. You see me but you dont realize how far I am away.

 

I think "don't realize how far away I am" would sound a little better as far as phrasing goes. That shouldn't mess with the flow.

The last two lines are definitely really good lines, otherwise!