Poem (please give your opinion)

Discussion in 'Lesbian, Gay, Bi, Trans, etc.' started by BigAl2539, Jan 19, 2009.

  1. BigAl2539

    BigAl2539 Member

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    THESE BLUE EYES:​


    These blue eyes,
    They leak my tears.
    Of my torment
    from these past years.
    It's so confusing
    What occurs in my brain.
    I voice no worries
    But I can mask no pain.
    I know I'm not alone
    But I'm different inside.
    My screams are not heard
    They are in my mind.
    But still they mock me.
    But still I am hated.
    For this eternal rumor,
    My fear has become dated.
    These blue eyes,
    They hide no disguise.
    They need only peek
    To see their own lies.
    But are they lies?
    Does anyone know?
    Certainly not me.
    I wish it would show.
    Some kind of omen
    Some kind of sign
    To show that my fear
    Is completely benign.
    These blue eyes,
    They mask no pain.
    These blue eyes,
    They wander yet again.
    They land on other eyes,
    Desperate to see
    Who this boy is,
    Whatever I may be.
    I view it about school
    I view it on TVs.
    But yet the world
    Can't see the forest for the trees.
    They cannot contemplate
    What I can sustain
    This kind of hurt,
    This kind of pain.
    Am I so different?
    Am I different at all?
    They do not ask.
    They lack no gall.
    They spread the words
    That affect my brain.
    Do they cause the hurt?
    Do they cause the pain?
    These blue eyes,
    They hide no pain.
    But still I fear,
    And I hide once again.​
     
  2. BlackandGold

    BlackandGold Guest

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    hehe... isn't bad
    keep going
     

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