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paint me

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by mystiblu, Jan 15, 2009.

  1. mystiblu

    mystiblu Member

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    lock me away,
    throw out my key.
    keep me a secret
    where no one will ever see.

    of all this affliction,
    of pain youve caused,
    build me a prison
    for forgetting your laws.

    without windows
    without doors
    without mirrors,
    scream i can no more.

    paint me all in grey,
    whites too bright
    black cliche.
    pour the color over me

    make me one with my enemy.
     
  2. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    i love this piece of writing..
    its so full of that what i feel is most important
    the truth..about ourselves and others
    inside and out..

    again this is a moving piece and i hope your words reach you...
    lovenpeace from saff..
     
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