All Night I've Waited

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by TheLizardKingMike, Oct 21, 2004.

  1. TheLizardKingMike

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    All night I've waited
    For you to come
    Each moment w/out you makes this one sweeter
    All I can give to you, my muse, is my immortal all

    Divine angel of wonderous intrigue
    Unfathomable beauty w/ a mind to match
    Incredible bounty of stunning rays
    A vision of surreal surrounds
    Ecstatic extasy

    She moved like a silent-swift serpeant
    Soft and luxorious flower
    A pleasent portrait of perfection
    Extravagance renowned
    A scarlet figure of immaculate composure collapsing on the cool calculus of reason

    Wild woman and manic man
    Bounded by energy
    These times of love are not in vain
    Two together are one in the same
    You are the body of my soul
     
  2. sylvanlightning

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    All night I've waited,
    For you to come;
    Each moment without you,
    makes this one sweeter.
    All I can give to you, my muse,
    is my immortal all.

    Divine angel of wondrous intrigue;
    Unfathomable beauty,
    with a mind to match;
    Incredible bounty of stunning rays;
    A vision of surreal surrounds;
    Ecstatic ecstasy...

    She moved like a silent-swift serpent,
    Soft and luxurious flower,
    A pleasant portrait of perfection;
    Extravagance renowned,
    A scarlet figure of immaculate composure,
    collapsing on the cool calculus of reason.

    Wild woman and manic man,
    Bounded by energy.
    These times of love are not in vain.
    Two together, are one in the same.
    You are the body,
    of my soul.


    ~* I really enjoyed this one. Hope you don't mind my interpretation... helped get to the essence of the flow for me. Transcendental alchemy, here. Well done.
     
  3. PoetOnFire

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    you remind me of morrison, man. right on.
     
  4. TheLizardKingMike

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    Who's Morrison?
     

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