It Is What It Is.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by kween, Dec 30, 2008.

  1. kween

    kween Member

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    When You Love Someone, Ya You Give Em'
    Your All, Fuck Tryna Know Everything,
    Gotta Walk For You Crawl/


    Start From The Bottom, Work Your Way
    To The Top, Keep It Real To Yourself And
    You'll Never Be Stopped/


    Do What You Do To The Best Of Your
    Abilities, The Greatness You Posses
    Will Light Up All The Possibilities/


    That You Never Imagined, That You've
    Never Seen, Don't Let Your Mind Linger
    Just Go When It Turn Green/


    Nobody's Perfect, Ya We All Got Flaws,
    But How Would You Have Mastered It If
    You Never Had To Fall/


    Give Things A Chance, And See If Its
    Rights, And If Things Don't Go Good
    Least You Know You Gave It A Try/


    What Do You Do When The World Turn
    Its Back, The World Now So Cold, Got
    This Red Heart Turned Black/


    Though My Guards Are Up, Ya My Heart
    Still Feels, Feignin' For A Nigga's Love
    That I Know Aint Real/


    What Am I Suppose To Do But Just Close
    That Chapter, Try Ta Hang On Till
    Another One Opens Shortly After/


    Proceed Towards The Present,let The
    Past Be The Past, Learn And Grow From
    It And Hope To Be Able To Grasp/


    The Concept Of Things Never Bein'
    The Same, And Shit Always Happen
    Maybe Its Bout Time For That Change/


    Do Things For Me, And Help Better
    Myself, Cause At The End Of The Day
    You Aint Got No One But Yourself/


    No One Knows You Better Than You Know
    You, Learn To Love Yourself First Than
    Try To Pull Through/


    All The Obstacles That Life Chooses To
    Throw, Study Your Mistakes Closely And
    Begin To Grow/


    The Skies The Limit, Ya Reach For The
    Stars, Don't Be Intimidated By No One
    Just Be Who You Are/


    Be Thankful For Life, Be Thankful For
    Your Health, Because In Due Time You'll
    Experience The Wealth/


    Not Of All That Green Or The Material
    Things, But That Wealth Of Happiness
    Down In The Depths Of Your Inner Beings/


    That Feeling Of Satisfaction At The End
    Of The Day, Has Help Set This Soul Free
    In So Many Ways/


    They Say All Good Things Must Come
    To An End, That's Only If You Close The
    Road And Don't Allow Another To Begin/

    Knowledge Of Self.
    Lady_kween.
     
  2. kween

    kween Member

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    feedback is greatly appreciated.
    :)
     
  3. mmg

    mmg fish out of water

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    here you use a double negative. where what you intended to say was "be intimidated by no one." what your line meant was "be intimidated by all."

    see. keep rhyming and tell me some real shit instead of this self help hip hop confucious crap.
     
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