new poem 2

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by marcella312001, Oct 20, 2004.

  1. marcella312001

    marcella312001 Member

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    I can not stay, and yet I can not walk away.
    My heart is torn between the things I should
    and should not say.
    My world is stone, my heart is weak,
    my soul yearns for desire so sweet.
    I reach for you, you turn away.
    They reach for me, I can not stay.
     
    marcella312001, Oct 20, 2004
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  3. kidder

    kidder Member

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    A kind of sad, mellow ending- like it! Keep at it- you're doing fine!
     
    kidder, Oct 20, 2004
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  5. marcella312001

    marcella312001 Member

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    Thank you kidder
     
    marcella312001, Oct 20, 2004
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