Hidden Glade

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by marcella312001, Oct 20, 2004.

  1. marcella312001

    marcella312001 Member

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    Hidden glade
    Raptures night
    our passions join
    in forbidden flight.
    your lips on mine
    our souls on fire
    passion buiding
    HIGHER
    HIGHER
    Our body's join
    in passions dance
    our inhibitions
    have no chance!
     
    marcella312001, Oct 20, 2004
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  3. marcella312001

    marcella312001 Member

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    I wrote this for a guy I met on the internet what do you think?
     
    marcella312001, Oct 21, 2004
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  5. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    I've read it a couple times and find it very sensual. The one word I keep getting distracted by is 'forbidden'... just me, 'ecstatic' seems to restore the flow. Thank you for sharing.
     
    sylvanlightning, Oct 21, 2004
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