The Poet and His Muse

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Jack Maundrell, Nov 28, 2008.

  1. Jack Maundrell

    Jack Maundrell C.A.P

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    With eyes that glaze the heavens and hair that flows across the land she sits atop the mountain looking to stars to guide her to me.
    I come racing against the distance, against the tide, and against the odds to greet u to give u the missing piece of your heart and to take the missing part of mine, so we can live, love, and laugh forever 'n' eva
     
  2. Vetty214

    Vetty214 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    I like the visuals of the first line regarding the muse, it was impressive. The last line wasn't as strong. Keep writing and sharing.
     
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