Revolution

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Blkrubbersoul, Oct 13, 2008.

  1. Blkrubbersoul

    Blkrubbersoul Member

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    An early fall breeze tickles the nostrils
    of dark bays and cliffs on the shore.
    Entering the cavities, the wounded
    rock walls plagued with caves, it gushes
    inside them, spills out from the gashes
    and races upon the tide and onto the sea.

    The breeze, now a wind,
    taunts the waves, calls the water
    to fight for its name; element to element,
    body of liquid to body of nothing but movement –
    a mating dance, a sacred ritual of an ancient battle
    declaring war on the spray of the sea, its tears of anger.

    Some may call it a storm, this gathering force
    that troubles and wakens from slumber
    all the gages, ecstatic, anything but static.
    And the sea gazes, glazed over by the sweeping
    sweet whispers of the warm western winds,
    provoking, enraging, enticing the watery flames
    of the waves, which stay enslaved to the sea,
    bounded by atoms aspiring upwards, in love
    with the wind that can only carry but a few drops
    onto the land where it cries back to the ground
    for its lover the sea, that can never come on the journey
    without severing all bridges of nature.

    And if it could –

    It will be the revolution that revolves around
    their rotating rebellious body parts of water and air
    that quiver to vibrating electric charges, exploding
    on a subatomic level all around us and crash
    the unstable ground under our very feet
    as it becomes a landslide in front of our very open eyes,
    gasping in amazement at the beautiful destruction

    when sea and wind become one.
     
  2. Vetty214

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    i can feel this one as if i was right there standing on the shore looking at it with you. very nice, as always,
     
  3. Blkrubbersoul

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    thanks guys i appreciate it
     
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