Eternally

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Bhaskar, Oct 13, 2008.

  1. Bhaskar

    Bhaskar Members

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    In my mind I paint your face
    with daubs of sandalwood and space
    and the colours that I use
    have no names.

    In my mind I write a verse
    without no meter, rhyme or words
    and all the letters that I use
    have no shape.

    My thoughts fall like raindrops
    and blossom into flowers
    that I string upon a smile
    for you.

    In my mind I sing of me
    a fuller, freer, joyous me
    for which the dictionary
    has no names.

    My thoughts fall like leaves
    and dance into the breeze
    and the tree that remains
    is you.

    For I am you and you are me
    eternally.
     
  2. OneUndone

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    Nice one, Bhaskar...timeless beauty, woven sweetly into verse. Not cluttered nor dark...an enjoyable read.
     
  3. sunshine186

    sunshine186 midnight toker

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    This is lovely.
     
  4. snake_grass

    snake_grass Senior Member

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    that was a nice poem
     
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