Okay, a first post- something traditional. Hope someone likes it! I love you for so many things So many moments, so many times I love you for every thought that brings The memory that you are mine. I love you though the future fools, Our lives but to trickle out this age And every moment brings a date That never brings the sight of you. I love you then for present times When we can say we love and we do- I'll love you forever though we find Ours was never such a love to choose.
I really got into the efficient flow... I always like when words have an intent beyond their definition, if you know what I mean Excellent use of language; thanks for sharing this!
lovely urs was never a love to choose: how life has its paths marked already...... love n peace from saff
It's something I wrote a couple of years ago for a very special girl. Corny? You bet! Sappy? Hopefully! But I wanted to experiment with all forms.... and so I did. Hey, I've even written a bunch of sonnets. Gawd, you'd hate them!
Really enjoyed this poem and the other as well. I'm actually very fond of sonnets. Amazing how some people can consistently write in that meter.
I loved the whole poem, I thought it was great. My favorite line is "When we can say we love and we do-" When I read that I was thinking "aaww" Loved it! Thanks for sharing it.
Every moment contains within it the kernel of something unforgettable. Sometimes, something small is allowed to stay. "Let this moment live" and why not. All around us are marshalled the legions of decay.... Hey, I liked your effort!
awww.... thats so sweet, i wish my boyfriend would write something like that for me..but i end up writting it for him, thats kool ,,,who is it for??? did you know u can keep your christmas tree alive and large by spreading crushed up viagra int he dirt base..its true. (i heard it)
When I was 15, I was a student counsellor at a summer camp. Met some wonderful people and one special girl from BC. I haven't seen her since but I still think about her. That's it. It's one of a small group I wrote for her. Glad you like it!
Thanks, Blackguard! You've resurrected this one. I'll always love this girl but the days, the days move on. And we are, even amongst our best friends and in our happiest hours, essentially alone.
