Dark Already

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by LivinNreflection, Oct 10, 2004.

  1. LivinNreflection

    LivinNreflection Member

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    Does it have to get dark already
    My fun was just about to begin
    I hope this doesn't happen again
    Summer wind, midnight swims
    Why do these times have to end?
    Here comes the cold, when everything
    dies away
    But I'll be living in my hot summers day
    Come join me, it's not faraway
    Come and play
    Everything you'll ever need is here
    So there is no need to fear
     
  2. kidder

    kidder Member

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    That's a tremendously potent opening line! Dark is such a complex word and fits well with the double meaning here. We all have places of special importance that we can return to at any time and this is yours. Have fun!
     
  3. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Wonderful and playful. I love it.
     
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