One Last Time

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by The River North, Sep 7, 2008.

  1. The River North

    The River North Member

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    I’ll hit the bottle one last time
    Right before I say goodbye
    My words will be slurred
    And the smell will mask my emotion
    You’ll think its all empty
    So that way we won’t hurt as much
    I’ll stumble through the door
    And give my little shpeal
    In my drunken state of mind
    Rambling about the past
    And the love we tossed around
    Then I’ll escort myself out
    No officers this time, thank you
    Our lives will be better and happier
    But I’m not going to say goodbye
    Not to you at least
    I’ll say goodbye to the barrel
    After I hit the bottle one last time
     
  2. stalk

    stalk Banned

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    Drunk! :)
     
  3. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    sizzurp.
     
  4. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    What a wonderful description of a crappy feeling. SNAP!
     

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