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so bored of sterile student lips
and the heartbreak switch
between heartbreak hips -
of taking the proverbial heartbreak piss
and the hit at the end
when the moment lifts.

 

sad. i think we all are sick of that. very good poem.

 

It was very moving and deep.

I'm definitely going to remember this one for a time to come.

 

Very short and to the point, deep goes without saying. Nice job..

 

i like this.

you have a way with sound.

just not when that sound repeats..

 

wow thank you all i wasn't expecting such good reviews.

 

you should write a collection of poetry, get it published!

 

snap snap snap! love it!