A little piece of my mind...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by fillintheblank, Sep 3, 2008.

  1. fillintheblank

    fillintheblank Member

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    :eek:

    I've never really shared my poetry, but i would def. love feedback. I'm new here, so i guess i'm posting this right. Much love to everyone and I hope that someone finds light through my expression of a broken heart. After all, there is a yin and a yang for everything.


    Magnum Opus

    Fading away
    Onto an unfinished picture
    My past is set ahead of me
    As each drop lingers
    Where is my masterpiece?
    Hidden beneath my face
    Is it the paint I give to you
    Or the brushes I take away
    I know these colors are bright
    crisp and fresh to the eyes
    yet mine do not see this
    These eyes are colorblind
    stepping back to gaze
    my artwork has me trapped
    sealing my ambitions with doubt
    As these colors speak so loud

    The absence of my being
    The texture of my pain
    Each pigment of my pride
    Soaks up all the blame
    And I'm finally out of paint
    With brushes far too stale
    Ambition has tangled me
    Within a love so frail
    Simplicity has me confused
    My fingers only break
    I cannot complete this picture
    There’s nothing left to make
    So I will slowly rip this paper
    Throw each shred away
    Each stroke before, now asunder
    As this painting has no face



    My Temperament

    Don’t want to medicate it
    This is just my element

    Stretched over delusions
    Thrown through intentions

    I feel the pain creeping
    Past all of these things


    Embracing frivolous thoughts
    Laughter is only taunts

    Set aside from the world
    We all hide and curl

    But mutual for us all
    Are these beautiful little falls
     
  2. OneUndone

    OneUndone Member

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    Good stuff, loved the painting images. Flows nicely and has real depth. Enjoyed it!
     
  3. fillintheblank

    fillintheblank Member

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    Thank you very much :D
     
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