I Need Weed!!!(POEM)

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  1. TopNotchStoner

    TopNotchStoner Georgia Homegrown

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    Blue skies above
    But all I see is rain
    No happiness, no love
    All I feel is pain
    Nothing to hold onto
    Nothing to keep me sane
    No light at the end of the tunnel
    I see no chance for change
    I try to smile and laugh
    But my efforts are in vain
    I feel so lost and lonely
    Without my Mary Jane:(
     
  2. Hamfoot

    Hamfoot Member

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    awesome poem man, flows well :] and so true haha
     
  3. Hilder

    Hilder The Ganja Queen

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    :( So true. good one.
     
  4. killswitchjd

    killswitchjd Senior Member

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    you suck (as I kick you in the balls)
    detox ftw.... as long as I dont have to stop.
     
  5. TopNotchStoner

    TopNotchStoner Georgia Homegrown

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    Thanks Hilder and Hamfoot.

    LOL @ killswitch. haha
     
  6. What??

    What?? Member

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    Nice poem man.
     
  7. skamikaze

    skamikaze Coffee Addict

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    Thats awesome man! I take it you got inspired by Shel Siverstein Lately?
     
  8. thisisme5

    thisisme5 Herbal enthusiast

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    I didnt even realize that was his poem.. i thought he was just posting it... great poem man can i use that for my english class? (Changing the last line of course)
     
  9. TopNotchStoner

    TopNotchStoner Georgia Homegrown

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    hahaha It is my poem man. I was just sad as fuck and depressed about not having weed, so I decided to write a poem. I made it up while I was posting it, so it only took about 5 minutes to write it, which is why it may or may not seem like it was just "thrown together" quickly, because it was. lol You don't have to change the last line. Just tell your teacher that your girlfriend, Mary Jane, broke up with you. haha
     
  10. stalk

    stalk Banned

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    definitely flows like johnny cash and silverstein ;]
    I dig it, bro
     
  11. TopNotchStoner

    TopNotchStoner Georgia Homegrown

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    hahaha nah man. I just like poetry. Plus, being without weed makes me depressed as fuck, and poetry is one of the best ways to convey emotions, so I wrote a quick poem about how I have been feeling, having no marijuana.
     
  12. TopNotchStoner

    TopNotchStoner Georgia Homegrown

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    Dank you kyndly, stalk:) That's a huge compliment:D
     
  13. stalk

    stalk Banned

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    I've never been good at rhyming, or telling stories
    and those guys are a HUGE inspiration for me
    especially now that you brought silverstein back into my life.
    It's been years!
    Thank you.
     
  14. TopNotchStoner

    TopNotchStoner Georgia Homegrown

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    haha not a problem man. Everyone needs to read The Perfect High, whether they use drugs or not. It's just a cool poem. lol
     
  15. Subliminal89

    Subliminal89 A Tokémon Master

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    Yo, TopNotch! your tolerence will be down when you get some so that's always a plus! And that poem is awesome
     
  16. TopNotchStoner

    TopNotchStoner Georgia Homegrown

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    Yeah the thought of how stoned I'm gonna be when I smoke again brings a huge smile to my face:D It's only been a few weeks, but it feels like forever. lol

    Thanks man.
     
  17. Charlisangel

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    I feel your pain man.
     
  18. TopNotchStoner

    TopNotchStoner Georgia Homegrown

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    hahaha I knew someone would:(
     
  19. urbro

    urbro Member

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    lol nice poem
     
  20. Startreken

    Startreken Marijuana Chef!

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    Man, I was going to say that! Oh, well. Nice poem. I used to write when I was in High School. I get it. Every once and a while I would go to coffee shop readings and read my stuff. It was fun. You should give it a shot.
     

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