Ramen

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Orsino2, Oct 8, 2004.

  1. Orsino2

    Orsino2 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    I sit and stare at the plastic
    That has just became
    A shrivled bit on anger
    A certain drop of pain
    This bag of ramen noodles
    Scattered on the ground
    Is waste for an unfortunate other
    Yet makes a humble sound
    Speak to me ramen
    Make your humble sound
    And wait for another day
    Just please don't skip town.
     
  2. sylvanlightning

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    Ah, and this too. All is alive with the magic. The pain of trusting and being stabbed, of opening to love and being let down... even this plastic wrapper lies silent and distant, not seeing your fire. Consume the noodles of yourself like galaxies beyond compare. Rage, rage against sleep in your waking to all that is. Gnash and toss like salad and gaseous cloud; exploding to start it all over again in this quest for your God-self.
     
  3. Orsino2

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    Sylvan... you're really starting to scare me.. a little.
     
  4. sylvanlightning

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    I will descend to meet you in this abyss if that is where you are, or rise with you as bodies of light on ancient wings. Just call, if you feel nothing but platitudes and know I seek but to be a polished mirror. Much love, my brother.
     
  5. Edward G.

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    He's right. You are creepy.
     
  6. Orsino2

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    Nah... Sylvan is unique.
     
  7. HappyHaHaGirl

    HappyHaHaGirl *HipForums Princess*

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    That was beautiful. And I love the comic book thing in your sig....haha
     
  8. kidder

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    Well, as long as you weren't the litterbug that put it there. Otherwise, I'd kick your ass!
     
  9. celeste

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    "EveryBody Luvs Ramen!" .... sorry,I couldn't help myself! ;)
     
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