Scars

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by chica17, Oct 8, 2004.

  1. chica17

    chica17 Guest

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    In Wensday's darkness,
    We were talking about sterotypes.

    Sitting next to me,
    You portrayed yourself as an asshole,
    At least to me.

    You started out by saying you hated cutter's,
    I am, was, maybe will always be, a cutter.

    That statement hurt my heart,
    Can't really explain why,
    Maybe because I thought you were better then the rest.

    Then you sliced my already hurt heart,
    you said they will never be loved,
    because of their scars.

    Well these are my scars,
    And although I'm not proud of them,
    {I even hide them},
    They represent me.

    You may find my scars ugly & disgusting,
    But each one represents a hardship,
    So fuck you, I like my scars.
     
  2. Edward G.

    Edward G. Edwardson

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    Is that a letter?


    And yea, I'm with ya. Idiots like that don't realize they're the kinda people who help them scars form. and stuff.
     
  3. kidder

    kidder Member

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    Where I come from I must admit cutters get no respect. And the word's dual: a cutter is well - a 'cutter'- someone who needs to wear publicly his or her hurt. A cutter is also one who can't take the heat- and 'cuts.' Around here they'll bash you both ways but it doesn't mean you can't encapsulate your feelings in verse. Write on!
     
  4. chica17

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    well, kinda, it's a letter but i didnt actually give it to him. He'd be to thick headed to understand it. And, kidder, i understand what you're saying....i know i'll get both criticism and praise.....but I really dont give a crap, lol.​
     
  5. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    [but I really dont give a crap]

    It kinda irks me when people say that, if you really don't care, why would you post?
     
  6. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    I liked this one greatly, a very familiar subject that I've had to help others with, so it hits home... I do think you could tighten it up just a little bit; take a word out here or there so that it delivers more punch, but it's really just cosmetic changes, at best... thanks for sharing this :)
     
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