the early bits that no one knows, I came to see you but I got lost in your shadow, Substance provides the plateau so you can preach, To people like me, major what do you teach? Metaphorical explosion of the heart, Suddenly its not so green here anymore, Love us all, all us love you more, I know you're just here to show us the door, But thats ok, Cos we were goin back there anyway Its survival by loss of direction and meaningful conversation, Beautiful lies and thrilling stands, Memories take us back to then, We can have it all again, Lets go back there, Let's just live it all again, Let's go back there... When it doesn't work the third time its called bad planning, Do think we can just turn and land here, In this protected pocket of society, It protects us from our insecurities, Let's us live, let's us give, That's why we're back here i just wrote this, without regard to structure etc, so try to look past that sorta stuff when (if?) you read it....it was really just a "get this crap out of my head" episode...so it doesn't even require an audience, though feedback is never a bad thing.... so what do you think?? apologetic ramblings, zoso
do u like any poems? lol anyway, i liked it , it was good for a just venting poem, u no? it reminded me of some of my writing when i vent sometimes poems with bad structure add character, and that is what i think ur poem has love everyones friend madison :sunglasse
