Random Poem...

Discussion in 'Random Thoughts' started by High Hunter, Aug 16, 2008.

  1. High Hunter

    High Hunter Member

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    Just felt like expressing myself...

    the water is calm, but the storm is subtle
    supple winds and waves act as a couple
    stirring the ocean while the crowds suckle
    the life that dwells below, and they chuckle

    they dont realize the pain they inflict
    to the great body of water they convict
    abusing of it like careless addicts
    and they dont understand the conflicts

    we can't see the ocean's tears
    yet they have been present, for years
    people put on their gears and bring their spears
    and kill everything, 'til it disappears

    this is, but a generalization
    a relation to my own frustration
    yet a realization, of creation
    and destruction of my situation

    and here, they make me a love potion
    a proverb, that will tame my emotions
    they say, life is in motion and there are
    many more fish in the ocean...

    so I dive deep down into the abyss
    dedicated to find me a new miss
    like I will find bliss with a kiss
    oh what I would do to relive this
     
  2. mystical_shroom

    mystical_shroom acerbic

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    very nice...

    Did you just write this at the moment..or was it one that you wrote a bit ago...
     
  3. hotwater

    hotwater Senior Member Lifetime Supporter

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    Well, you’re no Robert Frost :rolleyes:


    hotwater
     
  4. High Hunter

    High Hunter Member

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    Hehehe...thanks for the laugh hotwater ;)

    and yes mystic, I just wrote that upon waking up.
     

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