for all who live... i never knew the rapids,of salt would fall in to old wounds. my heart was stung and aches sometimes.... i immersed myself completely, a widened inner eyes view.. i trickled drops upon,your skin taste my thoughtful insolence. my mind was stronge and open once.... i tortured myself so willingly, a swollen soul undone... i caught the life,a colour of red it stained my inner self. my heart does long ,to match this contemplating mind again. now ive seen this inside out, i smile for i know..how life goes... i lust for love the,swollen time. these wounds will not annoy, to turn the tide,so rapidly. beaten until your down, once. stand alive once more....... thank you for reading.... for all i write this has been annoying me all day i had to place it here before i rolled into another poem... love n peace from saff
thank you so you see the world through my eyes.... aching and like the tides flowing to and fro...... love n peace from saff.... this will change
"i trickled drops upon,your skin taste my thoughtful insolence." magical pearls, of salty hue, rolling rivlets from your pure heart-spring knew; and i, you. namaste
i was in awe after reading this...very nice rhythm, soothing almost....this was my favorite stanza...
thank you all for reading i found this quite a personal account of my choices from yesterday to today i suppose.. and thank you skyfire for your help with the web sites... love n peace from saff
