Just a few poems, you don't have to read them all

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by I can't stop smiling, Aug 7, 2008.

  1. I can't stop smiling

    I can't stop smiling Member

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    Riddle

    Cradled in the arms of foreign skin
    That you are much too comfortable in
    Constant shadows cross my path
    Cast by nothing short of the past
    Beaten brutally by the shame
    A stab at dependency's middle name
    Absent memories fill my shrine
    To tinfoil that has lost it's shine


    Shallow Eternity

    Dropping the tune, sinking into the dull
    Morbid clouds of smoke, seeping through my skull
    Daring to be swallowed, tomorrow is our gun
    Swimming down the sky's highway, into a velvet sun
    A man's life ended when he started to love
    Chemical once was natural, when push comes to shove
    Happiness is buried under skin cells of despair
    Dogma is the leading cause of cancer in the air


    An ode to Sir John A. MacDonald

    "Just ask" the whispering wind slips to me
    But need is the greed we so desperately breed
    A simple gesture means the world to an eye
    That can see what humanity still tries to hide
    Teacups won't fill up with false apologies
    But they may catch these tears falling for sympathy
    A rare forced emotion that died long ago
    Because hate is the seed we so willingly sew


    Final Thought

    I've been eating ivy, teeth in stem, while cancer colors leak into my squared mouth
    You've been painting petals, melting medals, trying to get me, let me out
    You tell me "Cleanliness is godliness", well hey, I've never believed in god
    I've been eating ivy, hoping for a shorter night, and longer plod
    She stands in the door way, whores always stay, no matter who should own the sheets
    No need to pay, she's free today, for the price of front row seats
    I've been eating ivy, death by beauty, something in life I've never achieved
    "Exists a better way to end" you say, not that you should be believed
    Into my veins, the poison rains, filling, killing, turning my lips blue
    Why should I, could I, live another day in this world, smothered by you
    You tell me "Speak! Your silence is violence to my ears", and at that, I make no sound
    While eating ivy, I've been slowly pulling you down with me into the ground
     
  2. Blkrubbersoul

    Blkrubbersoul Member

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    You've got some talent. Some of the pieces here seem a little unfinished. Keep writing.
     
  3. I can't stop smiling

    I can't stop smiling Member

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    That's the way I write.
    My poems are usually short and sometimes have no real end.
    I can't add to them, I wrote some a little while ago, and I can't force myself to write.
    It just comes out, and once it's out, I can't add on anymore or else it feels fake.
     

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