the bottoms of her feet

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by inbloom, Oct 6, 2004.

  1. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

    Messages:
    2,317
    Likes Received:
    0
    the bottoms of her feet
    -----------------------
    her toes are like flower pedals
    soft little pads of joy
    flourishing in the garden of her feet
    with which she keeps in step with me
    the feel of the soft orangey skin
    on the spots that are underneathe
    the taste of the exact same place
    is the best in the world to me
    i'd die to have back the parts
    that she likes to colour pink
    to kiss those little places again
    that lead me to the bottom of her feet
     
  2. lucyinthesky

    lucyinthesky Tie Dyed Soul

    Messages:
    2,741
    Likes Received:
    11
    teehee this one makes me so :& cuz i hate my feet.

    i think peaceful jefferey will get a hard on for this poem. lol... [​IMG]
     
  3. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

    Messages:
    2,317
    Likes Received:
    0
    i don't know why in blue blazes you hate your feet...they are the most adorable little feet in the entire fucking universe.
     
  4. kidder

    kidder Member

    Messages:
    638
    Likes Received:
    1
    This one, like most good poems, begs to be read aloud. And that's when poetry catches fire, its flames filling up the room. Good one! Thanks!
     
  5. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

    Messages:
    2,317
    Likes Received:
    0
    no, thank you!! :)
     
  6. LivinNreflection

    LivinNreflection Member

    Messages:
    45
    Likes Received:
    0
    I loved your poem. It reminds me of my boyfriend cause he is always touching my feet and kissing them and saying I have the cutest feet in the world. Your poem is great, i really enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing it
     
  7. Barefootpeacepoet

    Barefootpeacepoet Member

    Messages:
    7
    Likes Received:
    0
    Awesome poem! Feet can be so beautiful if we just let them be natural and free!
     
  1. This site uses cookies to help personalise content, tailor your experience and to keep you logged in if you register.
    By continuing to use this site, you are consenting to our use of cookies.
    Dismiss Notice