the bottoms of her feet ----------------------- her toes are like flower pedals soft little pads of joy flourishing in the garden of her feet with which she keeps in step with me the feel of the soft orangey skin on the spots that are underneathe the taste of the exact same place is the best in the world to me i'd die to have back the parts that she likes to colour pink to kiss those little places again that lead me to the bottom of her feet
teehee this one makes me so :& cuz i hate my feet. i think peaceful jefferey will get a hard on for this poem. lol...
i don't know why in blue blazes you hate your feet...they are the most adorable little feet in the entire fucking universe.
This one, like most good poems, begs to be read aloud. And that's when poetry catches fire, its flames filling up the room. Good one! Thanks!
I loved your poem. It reminds me of my boyfriend cause he is always touching my feet and kissing them and saying I have the cutest feet in the world. Your poem is great, i really enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing it