(read as in a poetry slam, usually very loud & vocalized) nothin compares to summer love in the night in the day dreams that take me away from the street through the beat of my lovers soulful heart take it from the start. intangled in lies child-like chasing fireflies take it from the start. Age five, no broken hearts But really, what does it mean to be free or to fall? Kiss me up against the wall or just fuck me in the car. if it's really just all the same "in the name of the game". But summer love is better than winter love spring love fall love. WAIT. Can you tell me what IS love? Maybe it's that tingly feeling that overtakes your entire being and lifts up your soul how far does it go? Is it love or lust fuck me or trust me. Throw me on the bed and "Tell me you love me!" take if from the start. Twenty years of age one dick inside of me for each year i've been me. Or was it really twenty, or maybe -just three-? Artificial love might be better than real love than feel love then "I'll love you for forever!" love. Fake love feels good. make it hot make it fast make it last. (if you could??) take it from the start. Cant you see through my lies these are real tears in my eyes. Please. Just. hold me heal me steal me away. Naturally, Pretend love makes no sense it doesn't end with a white picket fence. you can call me old fashion but im in it for REAL love and passion. This is not some shameless self promotion or some stilly love spell potion. Im just saying it how i see it how i need it. how you need it. So. Take me from the start.
I felt the power and pulsating truth thundering and echoing throughout your sharing. These were my two favorite passages. Hope to see more posts from you.
that's just awesome... utterly fantastic flow exhibited throughout, and such passion, I loved this! and poetry slams are so much fun!... wish I could find them around my area again... thanks for sharing this, definitely hope to see more from you
I can't fault summer love. I wish you built more images around it. Hey, to hell with winter love. The world on a summer night offers a universe of dreams.
You're right nothing does compare to summer love. I seriously loved your poem, I could really relate to some of the lines. You're such a great writer. That is one of my favorite parts in the poem. Thank you for sharing it and share more
wow....i swear to god i am the biggest fan of poety that flows and that was amazing....its hypnotizing....thank you for that poem....
