Burn's Writings...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Burn, Sep 19, 2004.

  1. Burn

    Burn Member

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    From now on I'm going to post my poems and such in here, continuously updating and all the like.

    Just thought this up a little while ago:

    Death,
    So relaxing,
    Just as long as you don't,
    Look back.
     
  2. Burn

    Burn Member

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    Don't see refuge here,
    My home offers broken walls and
    Raining roofs.
    My will is good,
    My will is strong,
    But the rain will come,
    The storm will tear another piece down,
    Pour a thousand tears upon my back....
    What can I, what may I do...
    To pull myself from the rubble,
    And build myself a new once more?

    Demons, you are my reflection.
    Demons, you are in my soul,
    You are me.
    I must destroy you, kill you,
    In order to move on....
    I must tear down the rest...
    Rain down a thousand more tears,
    Put me to the test.
     
  3. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Lots of -debris- imagery jumps before my eyes but I'm not blown away as I probably should be.
    -My will is good- reminded me of the Nirvana lyrics.
     
  4. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Just this is enough. thank you for sharing.
     
  5. Burn

    Burn Member

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    As the day would come,
    The night would run.
    Under earth and beneath ancient blood,


    I'll follow her to the end.

    One hand and one way to pull me through,
    I'll point the finger,
    I'll blame it on you.

    You wish you could take me away,
    I wish I could too.

    The day would come,
    The night would run,
    Under the earth the blood has begun,
    I'll follow the Moon to the ends of time,
    She'll stay by my side as the day passes by.
    Watch the Star burn my skin,
    To Fire and Earth I am, within.
     
  6. lucyinthesky

    lucyinthesky Tie Dyed Soul

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    love this.
    reminds me of a doors song or something.
     
  7. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Great job. I really enjoyed your new poem.
     
  8. Burn

    Burn Member

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    Your eyes pull me in...
    Smile full to burst,
    I discover myself.

    Open my mind,
    Open my soul,
    Take me under,
    Let me go...
    Vision unending, timeless love,
    You free me from the cold below,
    and the fire above.
     
  9. strawpuppy

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    When I no longer have a face or a body,
    I will roar like a lion,
    Roar at the ferocity of my adversaries,
    roar at thier spirits,
    FOR,
    if I cannot overcome darkness with light when there is nothing left,
    then what is it all about?
     
  10. Burn

    Burn Member

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    Satirist pulls the doors open again,
    I'm standing at the edge and beckoning,
    In cold silence and distant gaze,
    I feel your eyes upon me.
    Anger to raise your fist, turn my cheek,
    Rage may be my light tonight...

    Guide me to the ground,
    The floor is so far from your eyes, I...
    Almost feel safe.
    Keep pushing me, pushing me on to...
    Broken hands, broken legs.
    Soon enough you've stolen me,
    Soon enough I am nothingness.
    Broken bones grasp a broken soul,

    But it's all pouring through

    Falling out.

    Anger to raise your fist, I must turn my cheek,
    Resent me, distastefulness, but I must learn to be.
    Battered spirits feel no pain once you've....
    Gifted them with numbing centers...

    It's alright. It's alright.

    My hands are broken, but they may break,
    My words are in shadow, but single chances they can take...

    It's alright. It's alright.

    Please, come hurt me one more time,
    You've binded your empty heart to mine,
    Please, kill me one more time,
    As I shove your body in the ground,
    It's alright. It's alright.
    Shove your head into the ground.
    It's alright, It's alright.
    Pound your body in the ground.


    It's alright, It's alright.
     
  11. strawpuppy

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    Pink Floyd "Shine on ( you crazy diamond)".....

    ok,

    peace

    love you too..!

    strawpup
     
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