As raindrops fall I think of you Remembering a time When we were brand new Now your heart is distracted You say you're confused And in the process I'm feeling abused But I want to let you know That I can let you go This time, we've invested Swirls down the drain And all of the feelings Were created in vain I know that sometimes My heart over reacts But I understand now Feelings aren't facts And though the time goes by so slow I can let you go The grass is always greener On the other side Just until you get there And then you want to hide You've made me feel ugly You've damaged my pride When worse comes to worse You don't want to be by my side And though you've made me feel so low I can let you go, I can let you go
hi there this is great, i feel as i read, it became a song in my mind dancing almost with feelings we learn to live with, lovenpeace from saff.
Very beautiful. Very sad as well, for me anyway. It definitely attached itself to my own personal experiences and wouldn't let go, so in a way it forced me to invest in it's symmetry for a moment or two. Simple, but powerful. Please, write more, we would all love to hear them, I'm sure.
Thank you all for your kinds words. This is the first poem I've posted in here for probably about 2 years. I will be around more!
