I got your letter today And I can barely say The thoughts I'm thinking now Won't come out of my mouth I passed you on the street And I couldn't feel my feet Wish I had you in my arms Under the stars And I can see you in my dreams Is it just me or so it seems I have no one to live for Anymore When I speak your name at night And I turn off all the lights I can feel the hollow And the burning of my soul Tell me it's not true I can't talk to you I lost what meant most And what I have to live for
this is beautiful how we remember what we had with sorrow, i hope this will pass and love finds you again love n peace from saff
Anyone who's obsessed with rock's one true god is okay with me! I like the fact that you married free verse here with the conventional by allowing units to control your lines. "I can feel the hollow...." I've been there, know what you mean.
Yeah... it pretty much just flowed out of my soul during class a few days ago. I kind of wanted it to be traditional yet contemporary... a little bit of everything.
Very well written, so full of passion and loss. I feel your burning, like a star whose binary partner has spun off... imploding with the loneliness, not wanting to radiate in aloneness. Yet, I also hear a very quiet voice within you that asks to be seen in silence and is muted in the outward search.
okay, well. sorry bout that. acorns should cheer you up though. here's a haiku fer ya: the acorns love george the acorns will cheer george up george is so happy
Leaves crunch under my feet As I walk this hollow ground Soggy blades laden with dew Dare not make a sound And all throughout the cemetary False echoes come and go What remains of what has been Surely I'll never know And what may have started And what may have been From dust to ashes and in between Is nothing but a simple dream
