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Discussion in 'Mental Health' started by jsnvermette, Jul 20, 2008.

  1. jsnvermette

    jsnvermette Member

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    i look as though my mind is a raging storm on some distant planet that nobody could understand. I remember heading south, I had hopped a freight train outside of lincoln nebraska, I thought of my love so much but it didnt matter because i k now she didnt think of me. all i had was a set of cold steel rails and a freight train running through my head. nobody felt sorry for me because in this life there was no room for it, pity was a forgotten word not only within society but also within myself but how i desired a female companion but women looked at me as dirty long haired bum. but i looked as though id rather be beaten by mother earth and her sweet desires then man. i was awoken in the morning by a screeching sound and i had found my ride had come to a halt. I jumped off and found myself in a ditch of stewage and stink and went through a cornfield. I found my way to a road nothing but miles of nothingness and skies as blue as the eye can see
     
  2. woodsman

    woodsman Senior Member

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    I like the way you worded all of that. It reads almost like a novel.
     

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