This was the night where ancient feelings arose A days breath into a shattered dream unfolds My angel wings clipped Spiraling ever faster to my dark demise Repeating broken patterns into mine eye My angel wings clipped Thoughts of previous fallen pursue He prays life's choices will pull him through My angel wings clipped Earth full of anguish imminently approaches Golden horses dragging dark veiled coaches My angel wings clipped Down there all that wait are pain and hate My only hope are those pearl white gates My angel wings clipped Save me now or take this honest man Take me now to your promised land _________________________________________________________________ I am a new writer any criticism or praise would be greatly appreciated. I don't have much background in writing and want to hear some feedback. Thank you
